Six Sentence Sunday: NaNo Two
I’m back for my third foray into Six Sentence Sunday with another six sentences from my current NaNoWriMo work…
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“Trent, seriously, we have to be realistic here. We’re not ever going to be able to be together. We can’t even touch! This is ridiculous.”
Trent bit his lip.
“I can’t keep doing this,” Talia whispered.
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Emotional six, Ruth. Nice job.
Wow, very nice Ruth. Very intriguing. Makes me want to read on to see if they’ll beat the odds. 🙂
Very intriguing! Looking forward to reading more. 🙂
Intriguing six. Now i want to know why they can’t be together.
Awe. Bummer for them. Makes me want to know how they CAN touch. 🙂
Aw, poor Talia. 🙁
Touching and so sad six!
Very interesting, posing more questions to be answered.
Ooh very intense! I love it! Awesome six, Ruth! Happy Sunday! *Hugs*
So emotional! I’m tearing up a bit.
What’s keeping them apart, I wonder?
Aww, I feel sorry for them and I don’t even know them. Great 6.
Oooh, they can’t touch! Sounds great. Good luck on meeting your NaNo goals!
Ooh, that’s a pretty big obstacle. I hope they can get creative and beat the odds!
So much conflict and emotion in so few words. Excellent.
great feeling in your six. Well done!
Wonderful. I feel so bad for them.
Super effective excerpt. I want to argue with her myself! Touch, go ahead! Looking forward to reading more!
Thanks for all the great comments! 😀 The reason they can’t touch is because they exist in parallel universes, it’s a sci-fi romance. So even if they wanted to (which they really do), it’s impossible. As far as they know, anyway…
emotional. good stuff
Intense scene indeed…so sad. I’m already emotionally invested, hoping they get to touch 🙂 Hope NaNo is going well for you xx