Six Sentence Sunday: NaNo Three

For this week’s  Six Sentence Sunday I have another six from my current NaNoWriMo work (click to learn more about the plot, in case you are very confused!) This being NaNo, it has not been edited at all yet 🙂

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On the far side from the bed was a chest of drawers and sitting on top was a picture. From the corner of her eye Faith saw him tense as she noticed it. Her fingers gripped the window ledge more tightly when she realized what it was. In charcol gray she saw her own face. Her thirteen year old self was staring back at her, eyes wide and lips slightly parted. Tears pooled in her ten years older eyes as she turned back to the man who had captured what she looked like the first moment she saw him.

Posted by on Nov 20, 2011 in Six Sentence Sunday | 6 comments

6 Comments

  1. Jessica Subject
    Nov 20, 2011

    A very intriguing excerpt! I look forward to reading more. 🙂

  2. Gem Sivad
    Nov 20, 2011

    I like the way you’ve set up your story. Picture, mirror, real face, memories. Very nice six!

  3. Gayle Ramage
    Nov 20, 2011

    An intriguing snippet. Good luck with NaNoWriMo!

  4. jayel kaye
    Nov 20, 2011

    beautifully written. I’m anxious to read more

  5. Christine Warner
    Nov 20, 2011

    Beautiful imagery…very emotional. Great six 🙂

  6. Alix
    Nov 20, 2011

    I agree, beautifully written!!

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