Six Sentence Sunday: Nano Four

For this week’s  Six Sentence Sunday I have another six from my current NaNoWriMo work (click to learn more about the plot, in case you are very confused!) This being NaNo, it has not been edited at all yet 🙂  This is the last Sunday of November, so the last one from Parallel Loves for a while!

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Roland bent down in front of Reece, still holding the gun, and took hold of his left leg with the other hand. Reece licked his lips. He could see a line of sweat along his father’s reeceeding hairline.
“Dad, please, don’t do this.”
Roland gave a firm yank and pulled the wooden leg off.
“You will listen to me,” Roland said.

9 Comments

  1. Jessica Subject
    Nov 27, 2011

    I’m worried what he’s going to do with his wooden leg. An intriguing six!

  2. Taryn Kincaid
    Nov 27, 2011

    Yes, intriguing, indeed.

  3. Alix
    Nov 27, 2011

    I’m with Jessica, an intriguing six indeed.

  4. Vivien Dean
    Nov 28, 2011

    I’m so curious to read more, though now I’ll have to wait, won’t I? Excellent job!

    • RuthMadison
      Nov 28, 2011

      That’s what I like to hear! 😛 The story should be done by May

  5. Melisse Aires
    Nov 28, 2011

    Wow, he’d better listen! Intense.

  6. Gayle Ramage
    Nov 28, 2011

    Pulling off a wooden leg? He definitely means business! :p

  7. RuthMadison
    Nov 28, 2011

    Thanks for the comments! Intense sounds good to me!

  8. L'Aussie
    Nov 30, 2011

    All the best with this story Ruth. It is intriguing. I wondered what was going to happen and that’s always a good thing in a story…

    Just a reminder that RomanticFridayWriter kicks off again this Friday. Hope you can share in the fun!

    Denise

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