Six Sunday: Elizabeth Dates an AB Guy

Six Sentences from my upcoming novel, Breath(e), a sequel to(W)hole

He walked into her room, where there was hardly room for both of them to stand up. The bed was the most visible thing there. Elizabeth nodded her head at it.

“Really?” Patrick said. “Are you sure?”

“Yeah,” she said.

Posted by on Dec 11, 2011 in Six Sentence Sunday | 14 comments

14 Comments

  1. Jessica Subject
    Dec 11, 2011

    Hmmm, what’s happens next? Nice six! 🙂

  2. Rebecca Royce
    Dec 11, 2011

    Wonderful 6

  3. Sherry Gloag
    Dec 11, 2011

    Interesting snippet.

  4. Chris Kelworth
    Dec 11, 2011

    That bed is looming large in more ways than just physical size. Thanks for joining in!

  5. Sondrae Bennett
    Dec 11, 2011

    Well, that’s a good way to pass the time. 🙂

  6. Angela Guillaume
    Dec 11, 2011

    I have a feeling that what she has in mind is not what we readers have in mind when we read your six. Lol. Very intriguing, Ruth.

  7. L'Aussie
    Dec 11, 2011

    Yes, what happens? Intriguing.

    Denise

  8. Alix
    Dec 11, 2011

    Looking forward to reading more..Great six.

  9. Lacey Wolfe
    Dec 11, 2011

    I’m definitely ready for more. Great six.

  10. Krystal Wade
    Dec 12, 2011

    What are they going to do in her dirty room?

    • RuthMadison
      Dec 12, 2011

      Hahaha! Oh no, I hadn’t thought of that reading as it being dirty. Will have to make sure it’s clear in the full manuscript. This is a dorm room and it’s just extremely tiny. 🙂

  11. Rebecca Quintana (@rrquinta)
    Dec 12, 2011

    Nice way to use setting to tell the story. 😉

  12. lexcade
    Dec 13, 2011

    It’s cruel to stop there. Simply cruel! I’ll be back next week, darnit.

    • RuthMadison
      Dec 13, 2011

      Yay! 😀 The whole book will be published in January, btw

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