6 Sentence Sunday

This is my first time participating in “Six Sentence Sunday.”  It’s another short writing blog game and I’ve been having so much fun with Romantic Friday Writers, that I’m going to try this one too.  Here are my six sentences, which are an excerpt from my novel (W)hole…

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“May I cut in?”

They both stopped moving and broke apart. Elizabeth turned and saw the man from the river and her stomach seized up. He was even more beautiful close up.

“Are you serious?” Robert said, but the man wasn’t looking at him. He held out his hands to Elizabeth.

 

Posted by on Oct 30, 2011 in Six Sentence Sunday | 16 comments

16 Comments

  1. Paula Martin
    Oct 30, 2011

    Intriguing six! Now I want to know more about the man from the river!

  2. Mina Khan
    Oct 30, 2011

    Intriguing excerpt & cover! I like the way you do your titles 🙂

    Thanks for visiting my 1st 6 Sunday post!

    • RuthMadison
      Oct 30, 2011

      Thanks! Even though the cover is simple, I think it does catch people’s attention!

  3. jabelfield
    Oct 30, 2011

    You’ve set a very nice mood in this 6. Nicely done. 🙂

  4. annecarver
    Oct 30, 2011

    Nice 6 to tease us with. 🙂

  5. Steven Montano
    Oct 30, 2011

    Nice 6 — good flow and motion, and very intriguing! =D

  6. Lorien Velez
    Oct 30, 2011

    Great six! A simple gesture but the man sounds wonderful. 🙂

  7. Stephanie Adkins
    Oct 30, 2011

    Wonderful six! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!

    Stephanie Adkins
    http://stephanieadkins.blogspot.com/

    • RuthMadison
      Oct 31, 2011

      Does it feel wrong to anyone else that this exact same comment is posted on every single entry? Makes me think mine didn’t get read 🙁

  8. Vivien Dean
    Oct 31, 2011

    Welcome to SSS! This was lovely, thank you for sharing!

    • RuthMadison
      Oct 31, 2011

      Thank you! This was a lot of fun to participate in. I haven’t made it around to everyone else’s yet, but I’ll get there! 🙂

  9. RuthMadison
    Oct 31, 2011

    Thanks for all the comments!

  10. ChristineWarner
    Oct 31, 2011

    very intrigued by the river man…intense six…nice job!

  11. Alix
    Oct 31, 2011

    Great work. I enjoyed your six.

  12. jayel kaye
    Oct 31, 2011

    Very nice beginning. Mysterious men are the best.

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