Romantic Friday Writers: Heart Stopper

http://fridaynightwriters.blogspot.com/ This blog has a challenge for writers of romance/love stories to write 400 words on a theme each Friday.  The theme this week is Heart Stopper. I’m delighted to be able to present this tid-bit today.  It’s a piece that I’ve had to cut from my current WIP.  It’s one of my darlings that I had to kill.  So, at least it will get the chance to do something.  I do love this moment, perhaps I’ll find a story someday that it will work for. Word Count: 392, you may critique in any way that you like. The set up is that Elizabeth and Stewart broke up a few months ago and he moved across the country, but the break up was very amicable and they remain friends.  Elizabeth has just been reading horrible...